Suppose that $y_1(t), \ldots, y_n(t)$ are solutions of $\frac{d^n y}{dt} + p_{n-1}(t) \frac{d^{n-1} y}{dt} + \cdots + p_1(t) \frac{dy}{dt} + p_0(t) y = 0$, and suppose that their Wronskian is zero for $t = t_0$, i.e.
\begin{equation*}
\left|
\begin{array}{cccc}
y_1(t_0) & y_2(t_0) & \cdots & y_n(t_0) \\
y_1'(t_0) & y_2'(t_0) & \cdots & y_n'(t_0) \\
\vdots & \vdots & \ddots & \vdots \\
y_1^{(n-1)}(t_0) & y_2^{(n-1)}(t_0) & \cdots & y_n^{(n-1)}(t_0)
\end{array}
\right| = 0.
\end{equation*}
Then the corresponding matrix is not invertible, and the system of equations
\begin{array}{c}
c_1 y_1(t_0) &+& c_2 y_2(t_0) &+& \cdots &+& c_n y_n(t_0) &=& 0 \\
c_1 y_1'(t_0) &+& c_2 y_2'(t_0) &+& \cdots &+& c_n y_n'(t_0) &=& 0 \\
\vdots &+& \vdots &+& \ddots &+& \vdots &=& 0 \\
c_1 y_1^{(n-1)}(t_0) &+& c_2 y_2^{(n-1)}(t_0) &+& \cdots &+& c_n y_n^{(n-1)}(t_0) &=& 0 \\
\end{array}
has a nontrivial solution for $c_1, c_2, \ldots, c_n$ not all zero.
Let $y(t) = c_1 y_1(t) + \cdots + c_n y_n(t)$. Because $y(t)$ is a linear combination of solutions of the differential equation, $y(t)$ is also a solution of the differential equation. Additionally, because the weights satisfy the above system of equations, we have $y(t_0) = y'(t_0) = \cdots = y^{(n-1)}(t_0) = 0$.
These initial conditions and the original differential equation define an initial-value problem, of which $y(t)$ is a solution. If $p_0(t), p_1(t), \ldots, p_{n-1}(t)$ are continuous, then any initial-value problem associated with the differential equation has a unique solution. Obviously $y^*(t) = 0$ is a solution of the initial-value problem; since we know that $y(t)$ is also a solution of the same initial-value problem, it follows that $y(t) = 0$ for all $t$, not just $t = t_0$.
We now have $c_1 y_1(t) + \cdots + c_n y_n(t) = 0$ for all $t$, where $c_1, \ldots, c_n$ are not all zero. Thus the functions $y_1(t), \ldots, y_n(t)$ are linearly dependent.
Conversely, if the functions $y_1(t), \ldots, y_n(t)$ are linearly dependent, then the system of equations
\begin{array}{c}
c_1 y_1(t) &+& c_2 y_2(t) &+& \cdots &+& c_n y_n(t) &=& 0 \\
c_1 y_1'(t) &+& c_2 y_2'(t) &+& \cdots &+& c_n y_n'(t) &=& 0 \\
\vdots &+& \vdots &+& \ddots &+& \vdots &=& 0 \\
c_1 y_1^{(n-1)}(t) &+& c_2 y_2^{(n-1)}(t) &+& \cdots &+& c_n y_n^{(n-1)}(t) &=& 0 \\
\end{array}
has a nontrivial solution for every $t$, the corresponding matrix is not invertible for any $t$, and $W[y_1, \ldots, y_n](t) = 0$.
you have $$y_1'' + py_1' + y_2 = 0\tag 1$$ $$y_2'' + py_2' + qy_2 = 0 \tag 2 $$ multiplying $(1)$ by $y_2,(2)$ by $y_1$ and subtracting gives you,
$$y_1''y_2 - y_2y_1'' + p(y_1'y_2 - y_2'y_1) = 0 \to W' + pW = 0$$ the solution is $$W = Ce^{\int_0^x p\, dt} $$
Best Answer
That's fine if $y_1$ never vanishes. That's why your attempted proof doesn't work if $y_1(x)=x^2$ and $y_2(x)=|x|x$, which is the standard counterexample.